Tuesday, May 3, 2016

Hi
Dear Mr. Cattanzara,
There are 10 years have gone since the last time we saw each other.
How are you ?  I hope that you are fine.
I'm writing you after ten years because I want you to know that I haven't forgotten what you did for me. Do you remember what you did for me?  I remember and I really have to thank you for it.
When I was younger I always wanted respect and a good life but I didn’t do anything, I just went at night and thought of a better future. My terrible lie to you about my reading made meunderstand what I did  to myself and I started to read a lot and also I found a job. If you didn’t open my eyesI wouldn't discover that was destroying my life
Who think that a little lie I have told you years ago would make this big  difference now? I would never believe that I could be happy like  I am now, I guess I should write a book about what happened to me so I could help others. It would be sort of a closure.
I well be so happy if you helped me write this book
Yours
Goerge.

1 comment:

  1. Dear Asala

    This is much better. I hope you did it on your own. You need to pay attention to the use of commas.
    content: 20/20
    language: 10/10
    mechanics: 8/10
    total 38/40

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